2013년 3월 10일 일요일

Monthly TOEFL essay #1-2 (Bonds and Break)


Nowadays, many people know the custom of other countries due to the development of internet. When I compare well-known customs of other countries, I sometimes feel proud of our own culture. Among them, I believe visiting parents regularly on traditional holidays such as Chuseok, and new year’s day is a custom from my country that I would like the people from other countries to adopt for two reasons. By visiting them, Koreans can meet and develop the stronger bond between their family members, and can have a comforting break time with their family.

To start with, visiting parents regularly on traditional holiday enables us to meet our family members, which is hard in weekdays. These days, Koreans can hardly live with their family members because most of the adults leave their childhood home and live on their own. I know that people from other countries also visit their parents, but it is not an extent that we can call as a ‘custom.’ However, in Korea, visiting parents at least twice a year on traditional holiday is such a strong custom that it is considered as an obligation being a Korean and it causes heavy traffic. Thanks to this custom, Koreans can see their family members whom are usually hard to be seen. It is a boundary which binds the family members including cousins, uncles, aunt under the name of family. Also, we can take care of our parents because we get to see them more often than the people from other countries.

Furthermore, we can have a comforting time with our family members when we visit our parents  regularly on traditional holidays. It is hard to take a break and look back at myself in the busy city life. I think family is the best solution for exhausted mind.  Especially, Korean students in the fierce, intense competition always look forward to Chuseok or new year’s day. In my case, even within 3 weeks in KMLA, I once have wanted my family to comfort me and listen to me. When I met my parents last weekend and talked about the life in KMLA or personal problem, even two days with them were enough to refresh myself and find a way to go. Like this, family members, especially parents, become a comfort by just silently sitting with. Also, they can give us useful piece of advice. When we visit parents on traditional holidays, we talk, eat, and take a nice nap. A student like me can also have a sweet break amid the zealous competition. Although we have to endure heavy traffic if we are to visit our parents on holiday, I believe visiting them will be a fresh energy to everyone who is tired of mundane life.

In short, I recommend other countries to adopt Korean custom of visiting parents on traditional holidays so that we can meet our family members, and have a break time with our parents. No one would deny the significance of family members, especially parents. I believe that there’s nothing time-wasting in visiting parents, and that it is a custom wonderful enough to be adopted to foreign countries if one of our customs are to be. The older we get, the harder we get to visit our parents. I hope less people avoid going to visit their parents on traditional holidays

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